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讨论板

David LiuAbout 4 min

讨论板

文章至少出现两个语法

长短句搭配

设计长句:把句型的分值拿满

  • 主干按下来,不同的记叙文成分安排在不同的句子结构里

答题流程

时间

文章结构

直给型

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让步型

好处:加多输出内容

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  1. 让步认可一位同学的观点,10-15w

    • A presents a convincing/persuasive/compelling argument
      • 支持:in favor of xxx/ that
      • 反对:against doing
    • Admittedly, Paul is right when...
  2. 让步认可的理由,After all, some people...

  3. 转折提出自己的观点,Nevertheless/However, (considering the responsibilities of (the goverment)/universities in xx), I think/am inclined to prioritize...

  4. 给予新的支持理由,In fact/In my opinion/view,...

    XXX have the potential to enhance

  5. 解释陈述,In other words,...

    可以是把第六句例证细节抽象出来来写

  6. 例证细节,For instance/example,..

  7. 总结观点,Therefore,...

    I firmly believe that xxx (is crucial)|(will substantially improve/contribute to ...)

    while xxx, xxx.

论证细节

万能理由

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例证细节

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  • 记叙文法:时间、地点、人物,起因、发展、结果,选 4 个要素即可
  • 引用数据:比如:According to the statistics provided by..
  • 对比分析:用对比信号引导,或虚拟语气假设,再论述一遍
  • 名人名言:需要大量积累,记忆耗时,备考有一定难度

论述

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如果是开放型话题,方向可以随意

范文

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Andrew presents a compelling argument in favor of promoting student sports activities.

Admittedly, sports are an excellent means to promote students's physical health.

However, considering the university's responsibilities in promoting academic excellence, I am inclined to prioritize the construction of a new library.

In my view, a new library can enhance teaching and scholarly communication.

A well-equipped library, serving as a platform for academic exchange and cooperation, not only provides access to print books but also offers high-speed internet connectivity and databases for interdisciplinary cooperation.

For instance, as cross-disciplinary collaborations increase constantly, both faculty and students in our Business Administration Department require establishing a new library that enhances the network across departments, which can provide interdisciplinary research databases.

Therefore, I firmly believe that constructing a new library, will substantially improve scholarly communication and strengthen our research capabilities.


::: detail 旧的

话题

  1. 社会生活
  2. 教育类
  3. 政府类
  4. 职场类
  5. 环保类,八月没有

独立写作取消,换成 discussion board

  1. 时间:20 + 10min
  2. 综合写作保留
  3. 独立写作变成新题型,类似独立写作主体段

30 分钟 -> 10 分钟

讨论版就是在写一个主体段

评分标准

评分标准和原本的独立写作一样(只是少了一些内容)

  1. 论证充分

    Relevant and well-elaborated explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

  2. 表达精确

    Effective use of a variety of syntactic structures and precise, idiomatic word choice

  3. 语法正确

    可以有少量语法错误,不影响满分

    Almost no lexical or grammatical errors other than those expected from a competent writer writing under timed conditions

    (eg. common typos or common misspellings or substitutions like there/their)

题型分析

题目主干是教授说的内容的最后一句,前面都是背景铺垫

  1. 判断题

    agree or disagree,或者直接给一个观点句

  2. 二选一

    A or B

    A is better than B

    Some people say A, while others say B

  3. 三选一

    Explain which one can influence your decision most.

    Which option do you prefer

  4. (四选一,非常少见几乎等于没有,形式与三选一类似)

  5. 绝对题:the best way is xxx(, do you agree or disagree)

    • 反对,举例一些别的好的方式,这种比较好写分论点
      • hardly can I agree as following measures are of top priority. (环保 2)
      • my view is that there are more suitable ways for a school to adopt.
    • 同意,就和判断题一样写即可
  6. 古今对比题,有时间差,一定要对比

二选一、三选一,不是必须讲其他观点了,除非不讲逻辑不通顺

总结

  1. 题目沿用

  2. 题型类似

  3. 话题更趋向雅思,有难度

  4. 时间紧张

    2+1+6+1

    步骤时间
    读题2 分钟
    提纲1 分钟
    写作6 分钟
    语法检查1 分钟
  5. 思路不易重合

提示

  • 先写一个主题句/论点
  • 社会生活类会更有难度
  • 背景可以不看或者答题与背景无关也可以,因为这个背景只是为了引出这个问题而已。
  • 展开上不要和两个同学重合了
  • 150-180 字

备考建议

  1. 时间:容易觉得实现紧迫,要把握好时间
    1. 思路,多输入语料、多输入题目
    2. 语言
  2. 思路,社会生活类,思路会有一些难
  3. 语言
  4. 模考,暴露问题

模板

In my perspective, [观点], and the reasons behind this stance can be substantiated as follows.

  • 选择题:
    • it is preferable to do A
    • [A] is the optimal option
  • 判断题:

For one thing,

For another,

Moreover,

Consequently, there is every reason to believe that

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