主体段
主体段
结构
A
To start/begin with, 主题句 1
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解释 + 细节
小结 1
So it is essential to xxx
B
In addition 主题句 1
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对象是任何人都可以,不写极端、负面的就行
小结 1
So it is essential to xxx
主题句
有利于
- be beneficial to do / for sth.
- be conducive to
- contribute (a lot) to
- exert a positive influence/impact/effect on
- plays a significant role in improving xxx
- be of top priority
- be of great significance to
- be of great importance for
- be crucial in doing sth.
- be essential to do sth.
- constitue a stepping stone to
- Is an advisable way to do sth through
不利于
- be harmful for/to
- be detrimental (有害的) to
- pose a threat to (health / environment)
- excessively exerts a nagative influence on
导致
- Give rise to
- result in
- lead to
- contribute to
Indulging in computer games gives rise to the decrease of study efficiency for kids.
目的/用来
as a mean to
in order to
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- 列举展开
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列举展开
For one thing, ... For another, ...
To be more specific, ... / Besides, /Moreover, /Furthurmore, /Additionally
(不能用 On the one hand, .. On the other hand 这个是相反着说的采用)
因果展开
Owing to, due to, because of ..., by virtue of
This is because ...
Obviously/ clearly ...
It is widely ackownledged that ...
so as to, in order to
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In contrast, By comparison
Comparing with, in comparison with.…, by contrast, , as opposed to
A while/whereas B.
正反展开
On the contrary,…
On the one hand, .. On the other hand,...
instead, …
Conversely,…
supposing that/ assuming that.…
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短小:主题句 + 展开 >= 例子
具体的细节(人名、地名)
支撑主题句
Here comes a concrete example,