讨论板

文章至少出现两个语法

长短句搭配

设计长句：把句型的分值拿满

• 主干按下来，不同的记叙文成分安排在不同的句子结构里

答题流程

文章结构

直给型

让步型

好处：加多输出内容

1. 让步认可一位同学的观点，10-15w

   • A presents a convincing/persuasive/compelling argument
     • 支持：in favor of xxx/ that
     • 反对：against doing
   • Admittedly, Paul is right when...

2. 让步认可的理由，After all, some people...

3. 转折提出自己的观点，Nevertheless/However, (considering the responsibilities of (the goverment)/universities in xx), I think/am inclined to prioritize...

4. 给予新的支持理由，In fact/In my opinion/view,...

   XXX have the potential to enhance

5. 解释陈述，In other words,...

   可以是把第六句例证细节抽象出来来写

6. 例证细节，For instance/example,..

7. 总结观点，Therefore,...

   I firmly believe that xxx (is crucial)|(will substantially improve/contribute to ...)

   while xxx, xxx.

论证细节

万能理由

例证细节

• 记叙文法：时间、地点、人物，起因、发展、结果，选 4 个要素即可
• 引用数据：比如：According to the statistics provided by..
• 对比分析：用对比信号引导，或虚拟语气假设，再论述一遍
• 名人名言：需要大量积累，记忆耗时，备考有一定难度

论述

如果是开放型话题，方向可以随意

范文

Andrew presents a compelling argument in favor of promoting student sports activities.

Admittedly, sports are an excellent means to promote students's physical health.

However, considering the university's responsibilities in promoting academic excellence, I am inclined to prioritize the construction of a new library.

In my view, a new library can enhance teaching and scholarly communication.

A well-equipped library, serving as a platform for academic exchange and cooperation, not only provides access to print books but also offers high-speed internet connectivity and databases for interdisciplinary cooperation.

For instance, as cross-disciplinary collaborations increase constantly, both faculty and students in our Business Administration Department require establishing a new library that enhances the network across departments, which can provide interdisciplinary research databases.

Therefore, I firmly believe that constructing a new library, will substantially improve scholarly communication and strengthen our research capabilities.

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话题

1. 社会生活
2. 教育类
3. 政府类
4. 职场类
5. 环保类

评分标准

评分标准和原本的独立写作一样（只是少了一些内容）

1. 论证充分

   Relevant and well-elaborated explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

2. 表达精确

   Effective use of a variety of syntactic structures and precise, idiomatic word choice

3. 语法正确

   可以有少量语法错误，不影响满分

   Almost no lexical or grammatical errors other than those expected from a competent writer writing under timed conditions

   (eg. common typos or common misspellings or substitutions like there/their)

题型分析

题目主干是教授说的内容的最后一句，前面都是背景铺垫

1. 判断题

   agree or disagree，或者直接给一个观点句

2. 二选一

   A or B

   A is better than B

   Some people say A, while others say B

3. 三选一

   Explain which one can influence your decision most.

   Which option do you prefer

4. （四选一，非常少见几乎等于没有，形式与三选一类似）

5. 绝对题：the best way is xxx(, do you agree or disagree)

   • 反对，举例一些别的好的方式，这种比较好写分论点
     • hardly can I agree as following measures are of top priority. (环保 2)
     • my view is that there are more suitable ways for a school to adopt.
   • 同意，就和判断题一样写即可

6. 古今对比题，有时间差，一定要对比

二选一、三选一，不是必须讲其他观点了，除非不讲逻辑不通顺

总结

1. 题目沿用

2. 题型类似

3. 话题更趋向雅思，有难度

4. 时间紧张

   2+1+6+1

   步骤	时间
   读题	2 分钟
   提纲	1 分钟
   写作	6 分钟
   语法检查	1 分钟

5. 思路不易重合

提示

• 先写一个主题句/论点
• 社会生活类会更有难度
• 背景可以不看或者答题与背景无关也可以，因为这个背景只是为了引出这个问题而已。
• 展开上不要和两个同学重合了
• 150-180 字

备考建议

1. 时间：容易觉得实现紧迫，要把握好时间
   1. 思路，多输入语料、多输入题目
   2. 语言
2. 思路，社会生活类，思路会有一些难
3. 语言
4. 模考，暴露问题

模板

In my perspective, [观点], and the reasons behind this stance can be substantiated as follows.

• 选择题：
  • it is preferable to do A
  • [A] is the optimal option
• 判断题：

For one thing,

For another,

Moreover,

Consequently, there is every reason to believe that

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